Banango Cheesecake

I would whack myself in the head, tell myself to get a grip and ban myself from the internet. What would you do if you killed someone who trusted you?

Lexa: I guess it was when I won the stupid bloody game and became the Queen of Eira. Chess: When Lexa made it through the game in one piece. I ...

Hm, interesting story. In my opinion, (please don't chew me out for this, it's a personal quirk of mine) a piece written in the present tense is confusing. Only her ...

Clovis dictates everything, including religion. If he said that anybody who wore pants was damned, everyone would begin wearing skirts. It's how much people fear him.

Thanks for the advice. I like Potentate. *goes to change first post*

Maximilian Disraeli has an ambition. No problem there, everyone has one. Only, his ambition is to rule the world. At age four, he decided he would never allow any pathetic ...

Thanks for your opinions! ^^ Hi! I'm JC and I'm going to be your reviewer for today.^^ My father once told that when the king weakens, the nobles start playing ...

It's not really about writing, but it's editing. I think it's part of writing anyway, so what the heck. Wait for a week or two before rechecking your story. This ...

My father once told that when the king weakens, the nobles start playing violent games. His words returned to haunt me last night. They left me sleepless and bothered me ...

This is my opinion. I hope it helps. “I can’t Java; I think it should be "I can't, Java; It would be less confusing that way. Since Java had arrived, ...

I think blond, perfect hair should be perfect blond hair. It gets rid of the comma and makes the sentence flow smoothly. Apart from that, the dialogue was a bit ...

The beginning's a little common, but it's all right. There's a reason it's used often - it's a successful method. The way you write...there's something about it that's somewhat strange. ...

Hello!! I've just returned to YWS after a looooooong break, but here's my review. It was great, although a bit dragging for me. It's intriguing, and that's good. I'll be ...

Hello!! Very true. Gossip is addictive. XD Anyway, let's get on to nitpicks: Every few minutes I would find myself glancing over my shoulder at Lori and each time I ...

Great story!! I found a few stuff wrong though... 1.) Velvety night sky, I'm not sure if there's a word velvety. I think velvet would work just fine. 2.) The ...